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Every book is a new journey to embark on. I mainly read romances, but I dabble in other genres too.

Where There's a Will

Where There's a Will - Raven McAllan

The introduction was bad. I needed more context. I couldn't clearly picture what was going on especially during and after the part when Will has a blanket thrown over him and is ambushed.

I didn't understand Will's relationship with his lover, like okay, so they're switching up for once who's the dom and sub? I needed more information.

I also didn't quite follow what was going on with Will's arranged marriage and the woman who was intended to be his wife. So she's in love with someone else and Will's father is okay with that and Will gets to be with his lover? What? It was all vague to me.

There was a number of typos and mistakes which didn't help my reading.

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